Kia ora Jaxon, You have done a really nice job of presenting your pepeha via a screencastify. Your personality comes through as well which is engaging. Next time you could show your slides on present. Mrs Krausse
I did watch the video and I can say, If you may, can you try to edit the video, and make the start soon. But your medals, 1. I liked that you used a clear voice, (Unlike mine) 2. I REALLY (being sarcastic) liked the way you have a long start, before you actually start reading it out.
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Kia ora Jaxon,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a really nice job of presenting your pepeha via a screencastify. Your personality comes through as well which is engaging. Next time you could show your slides on present.
Mrs Krausse
sup Jax your pepeha was very funny your personality really stands out on this peace of art
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ReplyDeleteThis is a good pepeha jaxon. it has got some good language
ReplyDeletei like your Pepeha Jaxon keep it up my bro.
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ReplyDeleteI did watch the video and I can say, If you may, can you try to edit the video, and make the start soon. But your medals, 1. I liked that you used a clear voice, (Unlike mine) 2. I REALLY (being sarcastic) liked the way you have a long start, before you actually start reading it out.
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